Revising a scene: Before and After

Me, before I revised the scene:

 

NASDAQ the black cat
No! I don’ wanna rewrite this! It’s full of emotions and icky stuff.
Me, after I revise the scene:

BjoergenSprintGold2010
This is so much better! I am a jenius!
Not always the case. But today, that’s how it felt.

Author: Evelyn Hill

Writer of inspirational historical romances. Crazy cat lady (i.e., I have a crazy cat) who lives in the Pacific Northwest.

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s